Friday, June 06, 2008

Evening

Pen in hand, brushing
White petals from my shoulders
Her kiss is gentle

3 comments:

  1. The line break is all wrong.

    Perhaps it is a sonnet or a sonata.

    I'll work on that.

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  2. Line break my ass. What's all this about kissing?

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  3. Pardon me, ma'am. I'm a gentleman.

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